littlewonder2

Little wonder we stumble in life.

Friday Fictioneers – Heard It Through the Grapevine

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The light was fading. It was late afternoon, and soon the daylight would turn to evening.

Robert stopped what he was doing, wiping his hands on the hand towel, and headed out the back door. Where was Angela? He thought then remembered where the last place she had been was picking grapes. He made a beeline for the grapevine.

He froze.

He heard it before he saw it, muffled voices, moans. His heart pounded in his ears, his body grew stiff. He ran, dodging through vines towards the sound. It couldn’t be what it sounded like…

It was. Angela and Nicolas.Β His vision went red.

For Friday Fictioneers.

Author: littlewonder2

I'm 25, and I blog to improve my writing; I want to be good enough to be published. I also studied Japanese when I was younger. Luckily, I'll be able to continue those studies along with Creative Writing next year in University.

18 thoughts on “Friday Fictioneers – Heard It Through the Grapevine

  1. Oh oh! Somebody is in trouble! Now I want to see what he does.

  2. He’d best grab a bottle of red and move on. Anything else is just going to taste of sour grapes. Good story among the vines.

    Aloha,

    Doug

    http://ironwoodwind.wordpress.com/2012/07/19/sweet-wine-and-the-fullness-of-time/

  3. I’m so impressed that you are doing this at 22. I’m two decades behind you but still loving the experience! πŸ™‚ Way to put yourself out there.

  4. Oh oh someone has been caught :). Very nice take on this. Thanks so much for stopping by mine.

  5. like how the title ties in — heard it through the grape vine… nicely told.

  6. Ohhh…I bet those vines will end up trashed. No wine this year! Nice build up of tension

  7. I can just imagine what happened next … nice piece of fiction with a great denoument πŸ™‚
    http://womanontheedgeofreality.com/2012/07/20/friday-fictioneers-the-grapevine/

  8. oh damn….not a great feeling to stumble upon such a sight. πŸ™‚ nicely done.

  9. This isn’t going to have a pretty ending. Good job!
    http://www.rochelle-wisoff.blogspot.com/2012/07/bittersweet.html

  10. Not good when the red mist descends. Nicolas better get his shorts and running shoes on quick. Nice one.
    http://mysocalleddutchlife.wordpress.com/2012/07/19/through-the-grapevine-ff-200712/

  11. Clicked because your’s has the same heading as mine :/
    Great job πŸ™‚

  12. there will be blood. well done.

  13. The power of the grape. Reveals lust as well as murder.

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